Can someone help me edit this essay?

Hi so I already published an essay on a really difficult experience for me and am practicing another one for a poetry slam. It’s about losing a close friend my age (I’m 18 from a rough area) and how the streets which first symbolize a connection with the world and later symbolize violence have destroyed me. I also want to get it published so if anyone could message me with insight that would be great.

There is a College Essay section for those sort of essays and people do PM to each other. But your request sounds like not college related? So maybe post in one of the Cafe’s.

sorry I really don’t get how to post on this site lml

PM me.

@determined2300 I sent it to you (:

I can edit your essay, if you still need help.

I sent it to you, thanks @BrownHopeful27