The prompt reads: In an increasingly global and interdependent society, there is a need for diversity in thought, background, and experience in science, technology, engineering and mathematics. How do you see yourself contributing to the diversity of Caltech’s community? (200 words max)
Basically, I have no idea what to write. I wrote a decent essay about how meticulous I am, and how’s that’s useful and research settings, and then weaved it into the lessons I learned on my research team. But, pretty much everyone at caltech is meticulous and diligent, so that’s not very good. Any tips?
What makes you different from the class of Seniors I had 9th period? What about you do your mom and dad and best friend love the most? What special talents and interests and hopes and dreams do you bring to Caltech that my 9th period Seniors don’t?
@bkjmom Ok, here’s a little background: I love playing a game called DotA2, and so do my friends. We entered a high school league for top high school players, and right now our school team is third overall. I’m the captain; I lead the team. Do you think talking about the lessons I’ve learned here would be a good idea? Are video games taboo topics?
EDIT: and then tying it into the lessons I’ve learned on my research team, to make it at least a little academic.
@Buck5266
Sorry, but what do you mean?
My original essay was a combination of how I’m meticulous/diligent, and the lessons I’ve learned from the research team.
My new essay is about the lessons I’ve learned from my dota team leadership and my research team.
Are you saying my new essay is better than my original (I mean, I hope so!)?
@bjkmom My dad suggested I talk about how I’m the president of the book club and how I lead there. He thinks this would make me diverse at Caltech. What do you think? Good idea?
I don’t think it’s any one answer that will make or break anyone’s chances.
I think they’re looking for real live people, with interests and passions and things to talk about. So, yeah, book club is great. So is DotA2 (though you’ll want to make sure they don’t think that gaming is all you do.) So are lots and lots of things that make you a unique individual.
Read the prompt: they’re looking for " need for diversity in thought, background, and experience in science, technology, engineering and mathematics."
The STEM experience is probably all over your resume. I think it’s the diversity in thought and background that you want to highlight. So mention the book club. And mention the gaming. And mention your part time job, and the volunteer work you’ve done.
All combine to make for a unique combination of interests that are YOU.