<p>Can you guys help me fix this sentence </p>
<pre><code>I enjoy seeing celebrities with the obsession to buy the latest designer brand, from the Louis Vuitton handbag to even a Louis Vuitton dog carrier that has a price tag that costs as much as a computer.
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<p>want to make it better</p>
<p>ONE sentence? I’d make it like 2-3.</p>
<p>But, maybe: I enjoy witnessing celebrities buying the latest designer brands, from Louis Vuitton’s handbags to his dog carriers, which are as expensive as a computer.</p>
<p>That’s the best I could do. IDK if there shoukd be a comma between “carriers” and “which.”</p>
<p>I love it when celebrities are obsessed with designer brands and labels, whether it’s the latest handbag by (ok, can it be someone other than LV? Unless you’re making a point with the LV somewhere, it’s just redundant), or a Louis Vuitton dog carrier that costs more than a new computer.</p>
<p>Is it supposed to be sarcastic? Like a satire on celebrity psychos?</p>