<p>As my old wooden door slowly opens on a Sunday evening, it is not the Pizza Hut delivery man with my stuffed crust pizza (with melted cheese baked into the crust) for tonight’s football game, but rather the dreaded family reunion that occurs once a year.</p>
<p>40+ words is at least 20+ too many for any sentence.</p>
<p>yeah tahts why I need someone to fix it. Can you fix the sentence please</p>
<p>Why don't you remove "(with melted cheese baked into the crust)"; I don't think that the admissions people need to know what kind of pizza you're having.</p>