Can someone help me proofread my personal statement?

Transfer Students UC Transfers
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<p>Hi forum,</p>

<p>I will apply to UCLA and UCI. Can you proofread my personal statement? I am open-minded/receptive to different opinions.</p>

<p>Thanks,</p>

<p>Kim</p>

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<p>You’d be better off having a counselor, friend or even your parents reading it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it for you</p>

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<p>I wouldn’t post my personal statement online.
People might ‘get ideas’ off of it. Listen to RamonaFalls.</p>