<p>It's an essay answering the prompt "Describe a defining community in your life and what it means to you"</p>
<p>I've got it down but still have some problems... and it's due Jan. 1st...</p>
<p>Can some one please critique it? Thanks!</p>
<p>sure send it</p>
<p>I've sent it by e-mail...Thanks a lot~</p>
<p>PS. When you get it, please let me know...</p>
<p>If you need someone else, you can pm me.</p>
<p>ok...I've sent it .</p>
<p>don't you just have to do that essay if you're not doing the commmon app essay?? that is unless you're not using common app...</p>
<p>yeah...I don't use that</p>
<p>yea send it one i'd be happy to read it over</p>
<p>I loved this essay. pm if you'd like</p>
<p>ok...I've got it sent.</p>
<p>I am an 09er but I have been accepted to college :) so you can also send it to me</p>