Can someone kindly read my essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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<p>Hello!</p>

<p>Can somone kindly read and evaluate my, "Why UPENN" essay for me?</p>

<p>I'm not sure if I did so well on it. So I'm hoping to get as much feedback as possilbe!</p>

<p>Please and thank yous :)</p>

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<p>Sure,
I will,
and I'll send you mine later tonight or tomorrow once I submit mine too (getting my teachers to review it first tomorrow XD)</p>

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<p>I'd be glad to take a look and offer feedback. PM me :)
Btw, won't be applying to Penn.</p>

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<p>I can give you some feedbacks, too. PM me.</p>

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<p>I will too. PM it.</p>