<p>again, i wrote something somewhat unorthodox. can anybody please read my essay and tell me if writing in the present tense works?</p>
<p>I'll take a look if you want. Just PM me.</p>
<p>all do it awfliho;osahtgpyhtg[yhg
the message was too short</p>
<p>i'll take a look. pm me if you want me to critique it.</p>
<p>just pm me :)</p>
<p>i could help out</p>
<p>sure, will do. pm me</p>
<p>If you'd like another e-mail, feel free to PM me or e-mail me at <a href="mailto:seekr452@aol.com">seekr452@aol.com</a> :)</p>
<p>its good that ur getting help, but make sure that u can trust the people reading ur essay. anyone can be a RD applicant and steal it. and u dont wanna edit it too much, then it wont sound like the real u.</p>
<p>hey, I'll read yours, and I'll send u mine</p>
<p>If you need any more help, I'd be happy to help.</p>
<p>if you still need some feedback shoot it over in a pm</p>
<p>i'd love to help</p>