Can someone look over my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone be interested in reviewing my essay? I found that it might not work at the last minute, so any help would be greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>THANKS!</p>

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<p>id help but i know i dont have any posts ill send you mine first if your skeptical.</p>

<p>also are you on my350z.com? cause on that forum we also have an anniez</p>

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<p>Sure, let’s trade.</p>

<p>And no, I’ve never heard of that site haha.</p>

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<p>turns out i cant send mine until i have 16 posts :&lt;/p>

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<p>I’ll give you some critique. Mention a school or two that you Are applying to so that I can put that into perspective.</p>