can someone peer reviewed my supplement essays??

<p>I am applying RD ..
i am an international student..
so my writing is not very good..<br>
so i really need some critical advices on my short answers :(</p>

<p>thank you!!</p>

<p>:) </p>

<p>i will email them to you...</p>

<p>gladly!</p>

<p><a href="mailto:dhan127@gmail.com">dhan127@gmail.com</a></p>