Can someone please critique my essays?

[UcMichigan]

<p>Deadline pretty soon.. thxs</p>

[anurodh]

<p>if deadline not within 2 days, pm me</p>

[UcMichigan]

<p>bumpie bumpy</p>

[movieburner125]

<p>I'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

[Grain]

<p>I'll read it too, if you want. PM me.</p>

[sweetdream]

<p>sure. Go ahead</p>