can someone please critique my umich short answer?

College Essays
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<p>College of Engineering Please describe your interests and aspirations in engineering. What experiences have influenced you?</p>

<p>thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>anybody? please?</p>

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<p>bump10char</p>

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<p>bump10char</p>

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<p>come on…seriously?</p>

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<p>Yea…sure. I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>pmed
thanks!
anybody else?</p>

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<p>bump10char</p>