Can someone please destroy my Common App #1 Essay?

College Essays
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<p>I'm applying to Vanderbilt, UNC, Duke, Purdue and Dartmouth so I need all the help I can get! Let me know :)</p>

2

<p>I’d be glad to give it a read for you, and destroy it if you wish. ;)</p>

3

<p>Sure i’lll destroy it</p>

4

<p>I am willing to do so.</p>

5

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

6

<p>Anybody else?</p>

7

<p>lol send it over, i won’t butcher you but i will give you good advice.</p>

8

<p>I’ll give it a read.</p>

9

<p>Sure, i’ll be happy to read it and give you a revised copy in a few days :D.</p>

10

<p>I will read</p>

11

<p>I’ll destroy it! Haha, but seriously, PM me!</p>

12

<p>i would love to :)</p>

13

<p>more than happy to destroy your essay :P</p>

<p>PM me</p>

14

<p>same here :p</p>

15

<p>Pm it over!</p>

16

<p>I’ll be sure to rip it apart lol</p>

17

<p>PM it over to me</p>