Can someone please help me correct my grammatical errors?

College Essays
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<p>Hello, Can someone please help me edit my supplemental essay? Just correct my grammar because i think i got the point. This supplement needs to be around 150-250 words and about why i want to be an engineer! Please comment or message me. thanks!! :) Feel free to give me some critiques if i need to improve on it or whatever.</p>

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<p>pleaseeeeee helppppp?</p>

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<p>sure i will</p>

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<p>anyone else? bumppp</p>

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<p>anyone?!! I need to submit this very soon.</p>

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<p>Pleaseeeee anyone?</p>

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<p>I can help you with it.</p>

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<p>I can help.</p>

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<p>Thanks guys. I already got it fixed and sent in my supplements. Now waiting for a decision. =/</p>