Can someone please look over my USC essay??

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys!</p>

<p>I was wondering if anyone could read my essay and give me some feedback.
I would really appreciate the help!</p>

<p>Thank you :)</p>

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<p>Please??? :(</p>

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<p>if you PM me it I might have some free time later tonight to read it over</p>

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<p>I’ll do it right now. Thank you!</p>

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<p>Since I mostly post in High School life, I guess I can’t PM you back. I could post my thoughts right here if that’s fine with you.</p>

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<p>yes it’s fine!</p>

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<p>PM me! I’ll be happy to provide feedback!</p>

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<p>Hi, i’ll read it :)</p>

<p>Sent from my VS910 4G using CC</p>

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<p>I PMed you two. Thanks a lot!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll PM it to you. Thanks! :)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look as well if you want</p>

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<p>That would be great! I’ll PM it to you :)</p>

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<p>Me too! PM’s always accepted- though you may want to wait a few days to mix in whatever you get from the other two (not that I have any less time to read now).</p>

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<p>Can we exchange our essays?</p>