Can someone please proof read my essay?

<p>Hi guys. I finished my college essay describing someone of importance to me and i would really like someone to delete some unnecessary things, and give me honest feed back. If you have time and would like to help me out please leave a comment and i will pm you. Thanks!</p>

<p>PM me the essay</p>

<p>Pm meeee</p>

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