can someone please proofread my umich supplement?

<p>If you would like to proofread my supplement, respond to this thread. i'd rather not have it proofread by any hs senior applying to colleges this year. thanks</p>

<p>Here is the supplement question:</p>

<p>Describe the unique qualities that attract you to the specific undergraduate College or School (including preferred admission and dual degree programs) to which you are applying at the University of Michigan. How would that curriculum support your interests? (500 words maximum)</p>

<p>pm it to me.</p>

<p>I just did, can you check and tell me if you have received it? I’m not sure if I sent it properly. </p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>mail it to me. i guess i can help</p>

<p>hey. i can read it.im applying to umich, but im applying to the college of pharmacy. so my essay is probably a lot differ from yours- but if u still dont feel comfortable, i understand.</p>

<p>PM me</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read it and give you some feedback</p>

<p>PM it to me :)</p>