<p>I'm going to apply to selective schools and I finished my first essay already.Can you please give me some comments? thx :)
tell me what is good and what is bad ;)</p>
<p>i’ll take a look if you would like-- email it to me as an attachment.
<a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>I’ll take a look at it.
PM or E-mail: <a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a></p>
<p>anyone else???</p>