Can someone please read 2 of my supplement short essays for me?

Applying to College
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<p>I would really appreciate it if somebody could look over 2 of my college supplements really quickly. They're not that long and all I would need is a couple of suggestions to tell me how to make it better.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance,
Sam</p>

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<p>Sure! PM me, too, if you’d like.</p>

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<p>I can read over aussi :)</p>

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<p>I PM’d the essays, thanks a bunch!</p>