Ok, so this is very late because apps for my top choice NYU are due in a week but I would just like some final feedback on my ‘Why NYU?’ essay and my common app essay response to the first prompt about an identity/background that is meaningful. I will not post my essays here but is any one willing to help? 
hello! i’d be willing to give you feedback on your essay if you give me feedback on my essay! you can just pm me your essay and i’ll reply with mine.
I can help ya out with feedback if you still need it.
i will love to take a look at your essay. feel free to pm me! if you still need it.
I got accepted to NYU ED! PM me if you want.