Can someone please read my common app essay?

[tiffal]

Please tell me what you think. It’s in response to the first prompt.

[gray7time]

id love to read it!

[osnappu]

for sure, PM me

[falcon97]

I’ll read it

[tiffal]

@falcon97 Thanks - ill pm you

[tiffal]

bump

[hscruiser]

I’ll read it @tiffal, PM me

[lollollol]

I’m happy to offer some feedback.

[Sajidur4]

Sure, shoot.

[archaeologygirl]

i’ll do it! i love to edit