Can Someone Please Read My Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi guys!</p>

<p>I wrote a rough draft a few weeks ago and now I'm wondering if the topic is too broad. Could someone tell me if it is? </p>

<p>Also, I think the beginning is too generic. The entire essay is 499 words, so I need to cut something out.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>I'll PM anyone who's interested!</p>

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<p>Sure. I’ll give it a look. PM me!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too :)</p>

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<p>Anyone else? Bump…</p>

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<p>Sure. I’ll read it.</p>

<p>Is this like an extended essay/common app essay? If so,
It might be a tad short.</p>

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<p>whoops. I take that back. Seems that mine is a little long. :)</p>

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<p>il look at it</p>

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<p>send it over, i’ll read</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I gotta pretty good eye for grammar send it over :D</p>