Can someone please read my essay??

Colleges and Universities A-Z Harvard University
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I decided to apply to Harvard last-minute, and I wrote an essay for their supplement. I decided to take a risk with my essay – it’s a transparent description of me; I didn’t embellish myself or hide my flaws. It discusses my introversion and how I can be perceived as shy sometimes. Would anyone be willing to read my essay? I would like to know the possible effect it could have on my application – if it makes me stand out, or if it was a bad idea.

I’ll pm you if you’re interested. Thanks!

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hey I would be happy to help :slight_smile:

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I can read it!

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Hasn’t the application deadline passed?

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@JustOneDad‌ Yeah, it passed. I’m not looking for any edits. Since I decided to apply last minute (no harm in applying), my essay wasn’t super thought out. I just want other peoples opinion on how it might affect my admission. =)

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I’d be happy to read it! :slight_smile:

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OK, PM me if you want more feedback.

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I can read it.
I applied SCEA, so I obviously won’t steal your essay.