Can someone please read my general Common App Essay?

[HuzaifaElahi]

Not sure if I should post it here but I’ll PM anyone kind enough to offer advice. I’d massively appreciate it!

Cheers in advance!

[MrAccountant]

Yup…I’ll give a look.

[HuzaifaElahi]

Thanks! I PM’ed you.

[DrSCHC]

I’d love to look at it! Enjoy editing so much for some reason haha…