<p>Serious readers only! Preferably English majors. :D </p>
<p>I've finished all three and the only essay I'm having issues with is the final one. Also, is it appropriate to end the first essay with a supporting comment for the department of your chosen major? So intro enumerates reasons and inspiration behind chosen major, later experience, and then concluding with a comment connecting your interests in the major with a positive "review" of the department or university as a whole? it reads more sincere than desperate. </p>
<p>biggest issue is with essay #3, but if someone wants to look at essay #1 that would be very helpful.</p>
<p>I’ll give it a shot, I majored in English.</p>
<p>not to seem rude - but im very anxious about my anonymity here. have you read other essays here at CC? can another poster vouch for you?</p>
<p>Do you need the help or not? I’m trying to be helpful and it seems you don’t need to be helped. If anonymity is a concern, erase your name.</p>
<p>i can vouch for cosmic</p>
<p>hey op. Becarefull though, have u seem the thread about asking people to read? may result in plagiarism.</p>
<p>can you link me to thread? nothing against you cosmic - but you seem new here.</p>
<p>Not really a thread, but i somehow saw this on google. [Ms</a>. Sun’s UC Admissions Blog - Why You Shouldn’t Post Your College Essays Online](<a href=“Error”>Error)</p>
<p>I have enough posts to seem reputable.</p>
<p>Send it my way, but I’m not promising I won’t steal it.</p>
<p>lol ms.sun. she doesnt realize that its nearly impossible to get caught for plagiarising. throw both essays out if they’re identical? these guys are reading 60 essays a given day. the last thing they wanna do, is go back in the pile and search for the “identical” essay</p>
<p>There always an influx of accounts made “coincidentally” the same month applications are due. Just sayin. </p>
<p>Just submit it later if you haven’t gotten a counselor to review it.</p>