CAN someone please read my supplemental essay and give input

Applying to College
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<p>I will pm you my essay you would like to read it</p>

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<p>Sure, I would love to read it!</p>

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<p>i pm’ed you</p>

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<p>did you get it?</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to read it :)</p>

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<p>i pm’ed you</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I haven’t received it. :S</p>

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<p>i sent it like 2 hours ago lol</p>

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<p>Just read it and gave you some feedback!</p>