Can someone please read over my UNC essay

<p>its not very good though...</p>

<p>...Um, okay? pm it?</p>

<p>I'd be more than happy to. Feel free to PM me.</p>

<p>i would love to read it... if u want a global perspective.. pm it to me!</p>

<p>Make sure that u are sending it to those people who are not applying to UNC ... because there is a possibility that people might utilize ideas and concepts from your essay.</p>

<p>sure! pm me</p>