can someone proofread my essay?

Applying to College
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<p>my essay is pretty much done, but i feel like it's missing something. any help is appreciated. i will pm you upon request.</p>

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<p>I can read it</p>

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<p>sure^-^ i will read it</p>

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<p>i'll be happy to do that</p>

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<p>send here</p>

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<p>sure, pm me</p>

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<p>pm it over ill try to help</p>