<p>I'm finalizing my presentation for my upcoming state fair, and I was wondering if anyone could read my speech and advise me on how to "trim the fat". It's currently at 6 minutes which is way too long but I'm not sure what to leave out, because my project has quite a few aspects to it and even as it is now I feel I am leaving important points out.</p>
<p>So anyone feel like reading through it and giving me advice on what to do?</p>
<p>Oh and don't worry about competition at the International ISEF, because after looking at last year's winners at my state fair, I'm 98% sure I have no chance in HELL of winning, lol. (I'm aiming for the 1,000$ scholarships which my state fair gives out as "consolation prizes")</p>
<p>Thanks :D
PM me if you'd be willing to read it</p>