Can someone provide some feedback on my essay

<p>Well, I'm almost done with my application. All that's left to do is pray... and that optional "creation" part which I'm going to twist a bit in terms of the topic.</p>

<p>Anyway, is anyone interested in providing some feedback on my essay? I'd be very grateful if anyone does. Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>PM me your essay if you want to. I can give you feedbacks in terms of what I think for your MIT admission. I assume that by "essay", you mean the long piece of writing about your background or something you feel like the end of the world. :)</p>

<p>I'll read it and give you feedback. I just submitted yesterday and its such a relief. Good luck !!</p>

<p>I'll read it too. Just pm it to me...submitted my app too :D its really a relief, but at the same time, its kinda really unbelievable that the whole things actually over... lol</p>