Can someone quickly look over an update letter I'm sending to colleges tomorrow?

<p>It's just a one page thing enumerating accomplishments since January, like qualifying for Nationals at speech and stuff. I'll PM it to you if you offer to help ou. </p>

<p>Please and thank you!</p>

<p>if it’s not too late, i’ll read it for you!
i just sent out some of my own.</p>