can someone rate my essay plz?

<p>hi guys, this is my personal statement, please reply asap? cuz its due 2 days from now…yea i know its long lol
o yea and the answers to the question is in paragraph form in order</p>

<p>can any respected or trusty members reply so i can pm them the essay?
just in case - its 1006 words (3 paragraphs)</p>

<li>How have you taken advantage of the educational opportunities you have had to prepare for college?</li>
<li>Tell us about a talent, experience, contribution or personal quality you will bring to the University of California.</li>
<li>Is there anything you would like us to know about you or your academic record that you have not had the opportunity to describe elsewhere in this application?</li>
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<p>"can any respected or trusty members reply so i can pm them the essay?"
I don't know if I fall into that category, but you can PM me your essays:)</p>

<p>i give it a go</p>