CAN SOMEONE RATE MY ESSAY

<p>Topic:
Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.
Assignment: Are bad choices and good choices equally likely to have negative consequences? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

PROMPT: For a variety of reasons, people often make choices that have negative results. Later, they regret these choices, finding out too late that bad choices can be costly. On the other hand, decisions that seem completely reasonable when they are made may also be the cause of later disappointment and suffering. What looks like a wonderful idea at one time can later seem like the worst decision that could have been made. Good choices, too, can be costly.</p>

<p>Im open to criticism, and pl rate and give some tips, i have my exam on the coming SAT!!!</p>

<p>At the outset, the issue whether bad choices and good choices equally lead to negative consequences is debatable and can be argues emphatically either easy. On one hand a good section of the society reposes confidence in the notion that may what come. destiny never changes and bad choice or good choice lead to the same end. On the other hand there are also those who are staunch on the argument that bad and good have two different paths, and a reusable choice can never have displeasing consequences. Introspection of the topic in its profundity nevertheless makes me believe that the odds are in favour of the first argument. I shall substantiate my stance with recourse to reasoning and examples in the ensuing lines.
One of the most important consideration that vouches for my beliefs stems from my experience at school. The summer had ended, and now, I had to choose between economics and physics. these were the two most lucrative subjects. After reasoned out research and considering the yin yang of both the sides, I ended up choosing economics. But, today as i look back to reflect, it seems like the road not taken - physics would have been the better option. EVENTUALLY, A plausible decision led to disappointment and suffering. The so-called 'good choice' ended up to be a paradox. So can't we still say that bad and good choice have a equally negative aftermath?
Another equally important paradigm is from the person of Steven Lenning. Lenning, was a undergraduate at Stanford, under the department go Artificial intelligence, before he dropped out o college. Like his contemporaries, Bobs and Gates, Lenning thought dropping out of school would be a good choice. He reasoned out that instead of burring money in college, he should pursue his dream. Unfortunately, 30 years ager as he connects the dots, he regrets and expresses that leaving college was the worst decision. He would have build his artificial inelegance company, T-Rex, with the undergraduate college fund. Can still same good and bad lead to different paths?
Apart from the examples presented, history has repeated itself to show what is destined comes, neither bad nor good can influence the ultimate end point. </p>