<p>Seriously, I don't even have a SAT based strategies for writing these essays. Based on my essay, can you guys give me tips (i.e - emphasize thesis more, etc.) I REALLY want at least a 10 for October.</p>
<p>This the prompt for the 8th practice test in the Blue Book, by the way (p. 837):</p>
<pre><code>As humans, we have a tendency to follow the constructs of social norms. Thus, when someone goes against these very norms, they are ostracized. I agree the presented excerpt, as those who courageously express their opinions to a hostile society face far graver consequences than the typically lauded hero. Exemplary of this is the late Dr. Martin Luther King and folk singer Bob Dylan.
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<p>It was once a long-standing notion in the US that segregation was justifiable. Their reasoning was that the most distinguishable trait among people was skin color. This was generally accepted by the Caucasian majority, who benefited most from this segregation. Hence, it was no surprise when Martin Luther King—or MLK for short—began advocating for racial unity. Of course, this was not well-accepted my the Caucasian majority at the time. Firebombs, death threats, and heightened racial tension were the results. But despite it all, MLK was not deterred and continued to preach his cause against these norms. Referring back to my thesisi ,teh sheer adversity MLK withstood from society for his cause is a testament to how he was hero not in the physical aspect; but rather, mentally. Having a great deal of society loathe him, he still acted courageously for his dream.</p>
<p>"... For the times, they are a'changin..." This profound quote by Bob Dylan was symbolic of an area. An era marked by a multitude of things: The civil rights movement as well as the anti-war sentiment expressed by members of the "hippie movement". Nonetheless, while Bob Dylan was not at the helm of these movements, his social commentary through his music went against the norm and made him a hero in this respect. His 1963 album "The Times They Are A'Changin'" offered at the time a radical critique of the stats of US affairs at the time - the death of Medgar Evers, ideas of racial supremacy, and the new road being paved by his generation. Typically, some were outraged by his criticism of norms ingrained in American society, but Dylan did not relent. He released album after album, and is now known today as one of the most influential musicians of his time. In this respect, Bob Dylan can be considered a hero as he constantly spoke his mind through the outlet of music.</p>
<p>In all, one does not have to overcome a physical feat to be considered a hero. A hero can also entail being willing to stand for his or her ideals regardless of the repercussions.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>