Can someone read and comment on my two Common App essays, please?

College Essays
1

<p>I've written two personal statements for Common App and can't decide which one is better. Can someone be able to kindly help me with this? It will be deeply appreciated.</p>

2

<p>Ill do it for you</p>

3

<p>Sure pm it over.</p>

4

<p>Feel free to email it over to me :slight_smile: neemagithere @ gmail xx</p>