can someone read and help me shorten my really long why tulane essay?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Tulane University
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<p>its around 1,450 words--i know it's super long. for those of you who remember, i'm taking a gap year and was already admitted to another university. so, what i decided to do was compare the two in each category that was important to me, say how tulane is better, and explain why that aspect of Tulane matters to me. i divided the essay into seperate paragraphs--each paragraph is a different aspect of tulane. </p>

<p>if you could just skim each paragraph and tell me which ones have the weakest points/evidence, so i can potentially omit them. or, you can just tell me how to shorten/combine the paragraphs. i highlighted parts that i think i can cut out</p>

<p>also, general feedback would be good. thank you!</p>

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<p>you can send it to me in a PM to take a look over. i’m a junior neuroscience major at tulane :)</p>

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<p>Me to. Wouldn’t mine trying to help. Just sent in my own app 2 days ago!</p>

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<p>i sent it. if you wouldn’t mind, could you guys also take a look at my general essay?</p>

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<p>send me it. writing major here.</p>