Can someone read and provide feedbacks for my essay?

College Essays
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I am writing it on an experience that molded my character. Please comment below if you are willing to read, edit and provide feedbacks. Thanks.

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Can we edit each others?

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I’ll take a look c:

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@aznboi4981 Sure!

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I’ll look at it.

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Sorry I want people who are with 100+ posts. Thanks for the offer though!

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Pm me.