<p>I just wrote an essay to answer Princeton's short answer topic: What talent, accomplishment, or pursuit has given you greatest joy or satisfaction?</p>
<p>Could I PM it to a couple of people here to critique my essay? Keep in mind that I tried to keep it as short as possible (it still turned out 330 words or so), so anything I don't need tell me but it will be hard to elaborate on things unless others come out. I like it a lot more than hair essay, in my thread below. And I know I restate the question pretty much, in my last line of P1 so if someone could help me with another way to do this, that would be excellent...or if it's good tell me too. </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>