Can someone please look through my Why Penn essay, and give me some feedback on it?
I’d also appreciate it if you could check my grammar/spelling and cut out anythng that seems unnecessary or superfluous ( I need to get rid of at least 20 words).
I can do that.
Is anyone else willing to read it? It’d be great if I could get one more person’s perspective 
Yeah, sure!
pm me
I’ll do it!
I’ll read it!