<p>Hello,
I need a few people to read, correct and give me feedback on my admissions essay. If you could help me I would really appreciate it because my english teacher wasn't helpful at all!
Thanks a lot,
Emma</p>
<p>Hello,
I need a few people to read, correct and give me feedback on my admissions essay. If you could help me I would really appreciate it because my english teacher wasn't helpful at all!
Thanks a lot,
Emma</p>