<p>its not an official essay....just a piece i wrote for english class but i want to try to modify it and edit it a bit in order to make it work for college.</p>
<p>tell me if youre willing to and ill send it :)</p>
<p>Sure PM it over.
I’ve just edited and advised 4 other people so I’m on a role here XD</p>
<p>i will swap with you if you are willing to review mine</p>