Can someone read my College Essay?

“Title” -> Can anyone read my essay and then tell me what I should add or fix in my essay. I chose the first one: Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.

PM me its only 486 words xD

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