Can Someone Read My College Essay??

I need someone to read my application essay for me. Any critique would be helpful. I’ll PM it to you if you’d be willing to help.

i’m happy to read it…but won’t likely send back comments til morning. Two things – make sure to include the prompt. And tell me what types of colleges you’re applying to.

Thank you so much!

For some reason I’m unable to PM you, would there be anyway I could email it to you?