Can someone read my Common App. Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hi, I'm applying to HYP and my common app. essay could use an edit. The essay responds to the first prompt on common app. If you would like to take a look at my common app. short answer too that would be appreciated!</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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<p>I’m usually very good about critiquing, I’ve done it for a couple of people and they liked my feedback so just PM it to me and I’ll look at them</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll edit.</p>

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<p>yeah, i’ll read it! just pm me or send it to <a href="mailto:angelmonicaw@yahoo.com">angelmonicaw@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>lol send it to me : <a href="mailto:narcissa09@gmail.com">narcissa09@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>I can’t find the ‘forum’ for common app essay reads but I’d appreciate it if someone read mine and gave me like a CUT THROAT honest critique.</p>