<p>Hi guys! I have a Commonapp essay written for the "challenging a belief/idea" prompt. My approach to the prompt was a little unorthodox, and I'd love to have someone who doesn't know me to read it and give their opinion!</p>
<p>Yale, Princeton, and Stanford are my top choices. For a little more detail: Please be as harsh and honest as you want, I mainly want to know how my personality comes off in the essay and whether you think I should make any changes to the actual content, rather than things like grammar.</p>
<p>I'd love to do an exchange, if you need someone to read your essay too.</p>
<p>Hi,
I am a Stanford grad and parent now and would be happy to read your essay and give you an honest critique of how it reads. Please also let me know if you are male or female. Thanks, L</p>
<p>I can offer my opinion if you’d like. I’m curious what your unorthodox approach is, perhaps instead of challenging you remained steadfast in your views while everyone was rebelling.</p>
<p>Peachmelba,
I read your essay and wrote back some specific comments, but College Confidential would not let me send a PM (private message) since I have less than 15 posts…ugh! They deleted my message to you, and I had not saved a copy. Nonetheless, if you email me at traderfever@********, I will rewrite the message and share my thoughts with you.</p>
<p>My email is at AOL dot com.</p>
<p>Thanks everyone, I’ve received enough feedback.</p>