Can Someone Read My Essay?

<p>Hi, I just submitted an essay for a BU summer program yesterday, and I'm starting to get nervous as to whether or not I approached it the right way. If someone can post in this thread, I'll PM them my email so we can communicate. It would also be nice if someone could read my financial aid letter while they're at it. I won't be able to change anything according to your criticisms since I already sent it, but I can always keep it in my mind for my future essays, and it will give me a general idea of how my essay was perceived.<br>
It won't take long, any help is greatly appreciated!</p>

<p>Sure, send it over.</p>