<p>Hi. This is the first draft for my essay. There must be a lot of errors. But I'd like you guys to just tell me if it's ivy league material...
It's on an experience of mine that I would regard as life changing.
PM me if interested!</p>
<p>" Certified vailaa bandaa " is here to help and please ! Should i pm u my email id ? XD</p>
<p>Sure! PM me!</p>
<p>I can give it a read if you still need help. :)</p>
<p>I can read it and give some general comments. Don’t worry about errors at this point, that is for several drafts down the road. What is important now is general appropriateness, the scope of the essay, the central idea and potential strengths. Also if you are getting your voice and point of view across and if you are having some original thought.</p>
<p>^^ 
Hehe. That was a long time ago… I’ve even changed my mind about what i’m writing about by now but I will be back with Draft 2.0</p>
<p>OH! I didn’t note that someone had revised an oldish thread,</p>
<p>I’m interested!</p>