<p>Hi! I was wondering if anyone could read my essay, especially since I'm having a lot of trouble with perfecting it. It's also a very personal subject, and I want to know if maybe it's too personal. Just in general, I'm looking for help from anyone! I'd be willing to either email it or private message it to anyone! thanks!</p>
<p>Ask for readers in the Essay forum. You can PM it to me and i will give you a general opinion. Oh it looks like you found the forum and cross posted?
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<p>I’ll read it, if you still want another opinion :)</p>