<p>Hi guys, can someone, (preferably someone who has finished their apps or has graduated high school) read and critique my essay? Comment below if you can, or send me a pm. Thanks in advance.</p>
<p>Yes 
Just PM it to me! I will gladly read it</p>
<p>I’ll read it too!</p>
<p>just finished my last app the other day, send it over :)</p>