Can someone read my Johns Hopkins BME essay?

<p>I just finished the first supplemental essay replying to the following prompt:
Johns Hopkins offers 50 majors across the schools of Arts & Sciences and Engineering. On this application, we ask you to identify one or two that you might
like to pursue here. Why did you choose the way you did? If you are undecided, why didn’t you choose? (If any past courses or academic experiences influenced
your decision, you may include them in your essay.)</p>

<p>Can someone PM me if willing to read my essay?</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look, PM me.</p>

<p>fyi, I have a friend that works in admissions (she’s a senior at jhu) and she said that adcoms use this essay as a check to make sure you know what you’re doing while you’re in college. if you send an envelope filled with confetti (which had happened) you will not get in. but if you write a reasonable essay explaining why you pick x major or why you’re undecided, you’re fine. so don’t stress out over this. </p>

<p>but if you need anyone to proof, i’ll be happy to help.</p>

<p>bumpppppppp</p>